Not all scars show
Not all wounds can be seen
I'll hide behind this sweet smile
When this dark soul takes in my bein
I used to look up into the sky and stand so tall
Now I close my eyes and hope for the best as I fall
I am in this dark abyss all alone
The light has yet been there to be shown
I am alone in the dark, cold abyss
The world turns as I talk
I'd rather be dead than miraculously walk
No one listens to me
No one cares even enough to look and see
So many people try to look
But they will never see
Eveything I feel is pain and misery
No one cares and no one hears me
When I scream
No one hears my voice
Things are easier than they seem
But to come and help is your choice
But, no, you've never helped me
I am nothing to you
Maybe I am just depresses and cold
Maybe I am just worthless like all the rest has told
But have you thought I'd also have feelings, too?
That I am human just like you?
Have you thought that I needed a friend?
Have you thought of how my life would end?
Maybe you don't feel the pain
Maybe you don't feel my shame
Maybe you could do me one last favor before I die
Just come over here, in the blood stained floors where I lie
Take this razor and sign my wrist
To show the world who left me like this
Author notes
My Emo story.
Tell me what you think and tell the brutal truth. Please.
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But have you thought I'd also have feelings, too?
That I am human just like you?
Have you thought that I needed a friend?
Have you thought of how my life would end?
Take this razor and sign my wrist
To show the world who left me like this
OOH. I like the emotion of this A LOT. That last stanza----very moving. can I use that phrase somewhere? I like emo poems, when they're done nicely like this. Ones that are just like "LIFE SUCKS" and don't say anything...well....suck. But that's of course another story.
Maybe you could do me one last favor before I die
Just come over here, in the blood stained floors where I lie
I think this piece is absolutely beautiful, but as to what its saying, I hope that you do see that you are loved a thousand times over.
pegleg
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i really like this poem...its ok so sad...great job...keep writing
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thx. XD
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Oh my. This is really sad. It sort of reminds me of cliche type stuff... But for some reason I don't hate it like I hate most cliche stuff.. This is excellent, I loved it.
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thx for reading and enjoying. ^^'
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Wicked *eyes sparkle*
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yus... i got it from an icon. XD ICONS ARE :HEART: !!! XD <33
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yus... i got it from an icon. XD ICONS ARE :HEART: !!! XD <33
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Icon? I SHALL GO ICON HUNTING SO I CAN BE AS GOOD AS YUUKI!!!
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ROFL. look up 'sad icons' on photobucket. XD or 'quotes' or SOMETHING. >.>
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This is awesome! I liked it alot! Alot of emotional thought into this! wicked write, well done and keep it up!
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thx a bunch. ^^
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