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Night



Night deprives us of the sun
But we gain serenity...

A contest entry

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  • torn thru the core
    July 5, 2007
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    that's why I like night lol.
    the write itself is also quite pretty... x


  • DesolatELifE
    June 20, 2007
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    *deep comment*


  • The Poetic Angel
    June 20, 2007
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    butiful 10 words congrats on the shiny xxx cheeky xxx


  • Harrisham Minhas
    June 20, 2007
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    Very nice and positive write.


  • shuvi
    June 20, 2007
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    bang on spot! great write!!


  • Naridill gold member
    June 20, 2007

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    Oh me likey, short, simple yet still imagery and strength prevail.

    Much luck & Thanks for entering quickie.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 20, 2007
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    really powerful use of words
    well done and good luck


  • Naridill gold member
    June 20, 2007
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    Your prompt is- 'deprives' 10 minutes!!

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