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my spot.

your secret spot
g-spot
touch
kiss
caress
you get off

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still just thinking on you

A contest entry

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 21, 2007
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    Awww...how sweet and giving!
    Love,
    Az


  • ScarletO gold member
    June 21, 2007
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    Afternoon delight!


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 20, 2007

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    damn...

    this sounds like a quick sex thing like something that will piss me extremely off. You did what a male would honestly do hit it and quit it. I like it cause you described as a sex thing onlySurprised


  • cheaphotelsign
    June 20, 2007

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    i like it. short. sweet and to the point! plus it has a great ending! well done!


  • Naridill
    June 20, 2007

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    Hmm a little off track but still in there, nicely worded.

    Much luck & Thanks for entering quickie.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 20, 2007
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    he he short sweet and powerful
    well done and good luck

  • Naridill
    June 20, 2007
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    Your prompt is- 'deprives' 10 minutes!!

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