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~Pleasure Notes~

Piano.


Pleasure notes that tickle the soul,
Indulging my spirit through dusty days,
Arriving within serenity of the mind,
Nostalgic within daytime dreams,
Only music of the piano purifies life.

(For)

"Music washes away from the soul
the dust of everyday life,"
Leaving us captured in tranquilities
Held within blessings and grace.

Author notes

Picture from.
http://www.italian-music-school.com/images/summer-courses/jazz-piano.jpg

This poem is part Acrostic. And I have infused your sign " Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life."

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  • ThePainter
    July 11, 2007

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    Yes, this is so true. Being a pianist myself, I agree with every word you wrote here. You expressed so well the pleasures of music.

    Nataly


  • liduen
    July 4, 2007

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    Acrostic poems are usually akward and random. This one is flowing and beautiful. It seems so naturall. Great job!


  • Inside and out
    July 3, 2007

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    LOVE IT

    This poetry makes me sigh,,,,,it is lovely. It flows peaceful and leaves a lovely tranquil feeling. Nicely done. A truly beautiful poem.

  • Tercarro
    July 3, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Beautiful and graceful.
    Music washes away from the soul
    the dust of everyday life,"
    Leaving us captured in tranquilities
    Held within blessings and grace

    Terry

  • Tercarro
    July 3, 2007

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    Beau

    Music washes away from the soul
    the dust of everyday life,"
    Leaving us captured in tranquilities
    Held within blessings and grace


  • Celticmoon
    June 25, 2007

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    Music is so much a part of life for us all. I love how you have worked in the quote from the picture, very clever. Your words are a pure joy to read each time. Thank you for entering and good luck!



    Blessings
    celticmoon


  • Malabu
    June 21, 2007

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    And as I think...

    how much music is the soul sooth of lifes weary...and while the notes dance in the air....whimsicle feelings dance in our minds.....as though a blanket of life covers our thoughts and kisses them good night...If I could sing to the roll of keys...a piano song would be the only music my ears will hear. the words would be those felt in my heart...
    inspiring words written
    Mal

  • -lk-
    June 20, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Music has such a way of soothing the mind and spirit
    I love the way you written this using the acrostic form. Very impressive!

    Best wishes in the contest
    A lovely verse as always


  • azure85 gold member
    June 20, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem about the piano, and the way music is a part of one's very soul. I like it so much!


  • debilynn
    June 20, 2007

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    this is great! i love piano music. the last stanza on here says so very much:
    Music washes away from the soul
    the dust of everyday life,
    Leaving us captured in tranquilities
    Of Blessings and Grace.
    so true so true. thank you for sharing this blessing. keep writing! God bless you always


  • Frogzter
    June 20, 2007

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    Music washes away from the soul
    the dust of everyday life....

    This is so true and you have penned a wonderful piece here my friend! I love that last stanza although it was all wonderfully done!

    Blessings

    Frogz~

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