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Hello Dear One





Dissension all around me
from people full of greed.


At this juncture in my life
there's a willingness
to try new things.


Your fervor of attention
has left me wanting more,
and making a conscious effort
not to be judgmental


So with palpable emotions
resting on my sleeve,
I welcome you
to my humble abode.




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I have used the words
1. ) dissension
2. ) juncture
3. ) fervor
4. ) palpable
and
5. ) abode

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  • Frozentearz
    June 29, 2007
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    Thank you for joining in our contest we hope that you will join us in the next round, there are two more wordbanks before the winners of all three compete against each other, hope to see you keep trying,
    Warm thoughts
    Tearz


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    June 20, 2007
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    Very nicely done

    Great use of words in this wonderful piece. Best of luck in this contest. ~Pamela


  • Exhaled Cynn
    June 20, 2007

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    Brilliant and beautiful. It flowed so nicely and the words in your list fit in perfectly. Great job and good luck in the contest!

    Cynn


  • Frogzter gold member
    June 20, 2007

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    Another great piece entered using words from the bank! THanks for entering and sharing in the fun of this ocntest. Best wishes to you!

    Frogz~


  • Frozentearz
    June 20, 2007

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    Thank you for joining in with us this contest sure has tapped into the creative minds of all you poets here at A.P. each of you bringing with you some great work,
    of thoughts and ponder.
    Many Blessings.
    Frozentearz

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