The pounding of this object within my chest
The longing and passion behind every breath
A crazy want for something unknown
A desire for this “this” I can call my own
I don’t know why I blink
I don’t know why we love
The more I think
The less I know what of
So I wait, for a change of season
Followed hopefully by the ability to reason
Unfortunately, there is not a way to know
For sure which the best way is to go
Some shy away and hide
Others search on for a light to guide
Not so hard if all you’re in for is the quick fun ride
But what of those with such confidence in each and every stride?
15-12-06
A contest entry
- your inner personal thoughts by x Bright Eyes x.
700 points, ended July 22, 2007, 52 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Beauty In Pain! by bangbaby.
300 points, ended June 18, 2008, 91 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
option 3. (felt myself on the verge of it... obssesive compulsive... thinking too much)
Comments
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Thank you... In three days this would've been written exactly a year ago. So glad that although I still can feel it... I can proudly say I'm past this point of great confusion! Fortunately~ lol lol
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First off congratulations on the honorable mention. This is a very good write I enjoyed reading it Has a wonderful flow to it.
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Exactly! I knew i was a hopeful person... thanks 4 the reminder & of course the nice comment too
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beautiful
--really, you gotta rap this one!
I love the sense of hope at the end.
thanx,
-Pap.
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i wish i had confidence in each stride..thats a great possession to have ,,well done peter
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With this one I had suddenly awoken at the crazy morning hour of 3:30 am and there was just this floating indescribable feeling of restlessness I just had to gather into words... this is essentially what poured out
thnx 4 the compliment!
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I don’t know why I blink
I don’t know why we love
love these two lines as you ask even the reader to ask them selfs that question well written thanks for entering and good luck -
Thanks there pretty blue eyes!
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This was a nice write. Thanks for sharing!
peace and love
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