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More than myself

Many days, I had been here.

Trapped on this island.


Somewhere I do not know, some remote highland.


Everything is gone, but not my fear.


Internal feelings of loneliness and confinement.


Wishing from my soul that my freedom is near.


But the beautiful natural resource that surrounds me, all gave life in

 

my refinement.


Now I know there is more to life than the mainland.


No work, no pressure, just my very own paradise.

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the last two sentence is random. hope you like it.

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  • jasminerose
    June 26, 2007
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    The inspiration you have drawn from the picture is one we all dream of yet, when finally experiencing this seculsion, it then becomes a time of reflection of all that we are doing in our life.
    Just because you are alive, doesn't mean you are living...
    A beautiful entry for my contest and yes, I do like it Thank you for entering!
    Jasminerose