Following the dream is this:
In a glimpse of possibility
we see that there has to be more.
Our determination leads us to the locked door...
With the key.
A contest entry
- Another Five Lines or Less by Heavenly Angel.
750 points, ended June 20, 2007, 26 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'm fascinated by the concept of possibilities, chances, choices. And your metaphor of the key is beautiful in its simplicity. It just strikes at me like someting so logical that I wonder why I never thought about it. Very nice poem!
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nicely done
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You always take my breath away ... even in the shortest form of writes ... the key ... in which will open the door to life ... determination is granted ... very well done ... you are a wonderful poet ... keep them coming my dearest friend ... for I look forward to seeing more from you every day ...
Sparkeh -
Very nicely done
Speaks so much truth and I enjoyed this a lot! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest
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