Flitter by insect!
Laughing once, but now no more.
Your death, Chardonnay.
Please tell me what you think
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Oh, I do like this very much! Clever and intriguing!
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Wow! Quite creative work! nice job. Could you check out my contest?
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3 claps...9pts
The Poetic Bandits
~Lilac
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Excellent penning of Form...
This is very good, 2 in 1...Acrostic Haiku
Insects make me very jumpy but this poor little mite didn't have much of a life, very sad, but a super poem
Love and smiles...
~Lilac
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lol, beautiful, it made me smile, then frown, a good sign.
Kaitlyn
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This is very good. I've only met one other poet who can combine two forms in one before. Very creative and clever
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LOL, this is too cute and so true LOL thank for posting this I ned a uplift this morning...great form !!!
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Sounds like this bug was caught in the zapper, or you squished it with the swatter - well written traditional haiku.
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Poor bugs. lol. Man bugs don't really bother me, I don't understand when people freak out at the sight of a moth. *shruggs* This was enjoyable. Good job.
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I don't like bugs especially these cicadas. They are rather annoying. It must be a sad existance to be an insect.
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Wow ~ that is simply unbelievable! YOU ROCK! I love this! you've blown it out of the water ~ go way above any other! NICE JOB! I love this!
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Good work on this one... interesting subject.
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Go Bandit!
This is an interesting hybred form of poetry, creative and quite fun. I shall have to try one of these. Thanks for sharing. Bandits Forever!
Dennis
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Acrostic and haiku, nice. i really enjoyed this! great write and wonderfully penned.
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An interesting write. Well crafted acrostic. Nice alliteration. Like the humor of the piece. Thanks for sharing.
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