How can those people block
Someone so sweet as you?
It's such a lot of cock
They don't know how to laugh
They must be insecure
I love the photograph
How is it words offend?
They're not the same as blows
These folk have lost a friend
A load of sycophants
Who praise each other's verse
Although their poems are pants
Just keep on telling true
And soon they'll learn to love
Someone so sweet as you
A contest entry
- A CONTEST for odd people - do it now. by Edna Sweetlove.
300 points, ended June 22, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I am returning the favour and Im really glad I did this is a great poem and oh so true. thanks for the lovely comments
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Now this is 100% smarm, or to put it in Airforce parlance, arsehole-creeping. Should do well In Edna`s contest, she likes a bit of buttering-up.
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Wonderful, I think she will like this honest verse. Good Luck.
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My friend Pastor Peter grovel has told me who wrote this and I am pleased you avoided any Scottish dialectic references as they tend to make me puke.
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There is no mention of God in this poem, which [in my view] is a major oversight. Otherwise it is a very well written tribute to Edna [who I have it on the best authority] will burn in Hell for ever.
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The first entry from someone who is both literate and amusing. I love the line "Although their poems are pants". I'll have to ask one of my colleagues in the Edna entourage to find out who you are..... I feel I know you already.
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I love it.....i wish i could write poetry like this!
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