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I See No Age on Love

Is it wrong to love someone so much older
Someone who makes me feel bolder
A man who brings out the best in me
And I’m not afraid to let everyone see

Someone who can make me smile
And be a gentleman all the while
He’s handsome and mature
Perfect for my nature

But no one seems to see
The way it needs to be
I should be able to love him
No matter the social chasm

We’re not that different really
We find a place in this humanity
A place for us to love
Floating free like a dove

When we make love together
I know it will last forever
Even though I only see that in my head
We’ve never really been to bed

Sure we have our physical attraction
But we feel the wait only makes a stronger connection
So that makes us seem even more set apart
That we would want a pure start

The politics and the grades
The people who organize the city parades
Those are the ones who don’t understand real love
The one second most important gift sent from above

So why can’t anyone set their politics aside
And realize I can’t have anyone else by my side
No one could love me like he can
No one could ever begin to fill that span

The forbidden love of Romeo and Juliet
Almost seems easy compared to our game of Roulette
Every time we’re together is a chance for a bullet
Someday I will have to take the trigger and pull it

I wish for that to not be the case
But I see no other room or place
Where our love can exist in total ecstasy
Igniting our most personal fantasy

Someday I hope you’ll understand
Why your truest love can come unplanned
Why everyone wants to get in your way
But with your only love you’ll stay

Author notes

this is based on a true love...but the relationship does not exist

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  • foreverrunning
    June 21, 2007
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    my love
  • janesmith
    June 21, 2007
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    amazing

    WOW. I think this may be the best thing you've ever written. It truly blows me away. Is this a love that you have, or someone you know. I'm guessing it's your own because it seems very personal. But you just made it up too, I don't really know. Good job keeping up with the rhyme scheme, it flowed pretty well. I love it!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    June 20, 2007
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    This was well penned great job Best of luck to you in the contest.
    Tory