One day we will be together again
I don’t know how, I don’t know when.
But, there is one thing that I know for sure,
my love for you will never bend.
Bring back the magic that we once shared,
tell me that you love me and that you still care.
Let me hold you in my arms until the end of time,
darling I will be yours and you will be mine.
I’ll always love you and I hope that you realize,
all that I feel for you is genuine and written in the skies.
You’ll always be with me wherever I am,
deep in your heart I hope that you understand.
Even though it’s been a while,
I still can feel you here in my arms,
This feeling of security and reassurance,
sadly it never gets me very far.
My heart longs to be with you,
my soul cries out your name.
If only you could somehow see,
all of the emotions that still remain.
Please tell me that you are coming home,
let’s put an end to this childish game.
Hold my hand and never let it go,
please tell me that you feel the same.
Open your heart and let me in,
tell me those words that I long to hear.
Open your eyes and see who I am,
I know that together, it will all come clear.
One day we will be together again,
I don’t know how, I don’t know when.
But, there is one thing that I know for sure,
my love for you will never bend.
Bring back the magic that we once shared,
tell me that you love me and that you still care.
Let me hold you in my arms until the end of time,
darling I will be yours and you will be mine.
I’ll always love you and I hope that you realize,
all that I feel for you is genuine and written in the skies.
You’ll always be with me wherever I am,
deep in your heart I hope that you understand.
Look into my eyes and you will see,
hold my heart in your hands and believe in me.
I’ll do anything that you ask and all that you desire,
as long as you are here with me.
Let’s sit back together and reminisce the times,
when our love was all that we knew.
Can you remember the first time we said “I adore you”?
Oh what it did to me, what it did to you.
I will never forget that day,
and the way you made me feel.
I will never forget that warm afternoon,
that pledge we made was so innocent and real.
To have and to hold you,
to feel your heart beating together with mine.
To hear you whisper those words again,
would be so wonderful and divine.
I wait for the day when we reunite,
I dream of you every day and night.
I hope that you are safe wherever you maybe,
and that someday soon, you will come home to me.
One day we will be together again,
I don’t know how, I don’t know when.
But, there is one thing that I know for sure,
my love for you will never bend.
Bring back the magic that we once shared,
tell me that you love me and that you still care.
Let me hold you in my arms until the end of time,
darling I will be yours and you will be mine.
I’ll always love you and I hope that you realize,
all that I feel for you is genuine and written in the skies.
You’ll always be with me wherever I am,
deep in your heart I hope that you understand.
One day we will be together again,
someday soon I will hold you once more.
And when we are together again,
I will love you forevermore.
A contest entry
- MUSIC by Folklor.
1750 points, ended July 11, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - songs by mitchie.
354 points, ended October 6, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this song of mine. I appreciate it!
Comments
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I liked the song a lot. I would love to hear the music for it. I can relate to some parts in here. This poem was filed with hope. It had a lot of emotion in it and I could feel it. I really enjoyed reading this. You did a wonderful job. This was written beautifully. Thanks for entering and Good luck in my contest.
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Awesome song (song i played while playing not good lol) good lucj
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WOW is right.did you write this?
i loved it how did you think of how to write this?
this is deff my favorite poem by far but more to come.
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Wow...
I like your lyric very much - alike in my mind - especially this part:
I wait for the day when we reunite,
I dream of you every day and night.
I hope that you are safe wherever you maybe,
and that someday soon, you will come home to me.
Thanks for sharing and congrats with your trophy
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I can really relate to some part of your poems of past memories... Its so blunt and yet so lovely, so beautiful and yes, sad... I loved it congrats for the silver!
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PERFECT KEPT ME CAPTIVATED TILL THE END AND ITMADE MY BLOOD RUN COLD FANTASTIC
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What beautiful lyrics ! Full of so much love and compassion for one person, it's absolutely captivating and alluring to the reader. This piece holds so much beauty that is so heartfelt & stunning. Thank you for the excellent entry & for entering
Best of luck to youuu ! ♥
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment on my entry. I really appreciate it and am glad that you enjoyed it!
Jeremy0826
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It's long but really good job
Thanks for entering
Goodluck in my contest!
xxx
Eli -
It was lengthy, and a bit cliche. But thanks for entering anyways!
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wow. long. long, but good.
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Not my favorite type of music but it was good. I liked it alot. It was well written. Keep up the good work
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Quite a lengthy poem. Has some familiar lines; also some good ones. Thanks for entering. Walt
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wow man. That was so powerful and full of emotion!Very good man. Keep up the good work, and good luck in the contest.
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This is absolutely amazing! A wonderful and heartfelt poem with so much emotion! There is a great longing and yearning in this piece. Excellent, all the best in the contest!
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Oh Jeremy. This is so soulful and loving. You have described and expressed your need and longing for her so well. Great job. Most of us can relate to these feelings.
Best of luck to you in this contest.
Jeannie
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Beautifully Written
Straight from your heart. What a beautiful love song this would be if set to music. Keep on writing, and good luck in the contest. Favorite lines Bring back the magic that we once shared,
tell me that you love me and that you still care.
Let me hold you in my arms until the end of time,
darling I will be yours and you will be mine.
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This is beautiful!
So much emotion, beautiful rhyme and flow...This shows the effort you have put into it, my friend....Excellent poetry!
Lynda
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