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[ Filtering is always a downward motion ]

Filtering is always a downward motion
a backwards step for man
We'll do it for the greater good
because it's our best plan.

Our peers to judge
Our loves to see
It's all up to us
We'll make the decree.

We've stolen God's thunder
overtaken his throne
this world is ours now
forget the o-zone

It's truly not us
that runs this, our life
and we can't even hope
to live without strife

So sit down and chill
stare into space!
Eternity chases you
look it in the face...



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  • Cup-a-Joe silver member
    June 30, 2007

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    I keep thinking, "this girl can't be 14-15.
    Your writing showes years beyond yours.
    I am amazed.
    joe


  • Broken Faith
    June 20, 2007
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    O...M...G

    Holy shit. Amazing. Simply outstanding. Nothing else to say, don't wanna ruin it.

  • emLeejo
    June 19, 2007

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    oooooooo

    ooo. give me chills.. very great. deep. but awesome like this has to be one of my favorites of urs.. this one was great. like if there was like a little applause and bravo encore whatever that thing is.. i would like so give it or click it for this lol. haha pretty much i just really liked this. especially the last stanza. hehe. great write.