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[Just one day]

For that one day,
To see your actions,
Your eyes, and your body.
All of that will be tomorrow!

Longing to be right there with you,
Longing to see who you really are in person,
And if your true to what you say you are.

Just a touch of your heart,
And the warmth being around you
Means a little bit more than you know.


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  • My Heroine .
    July 26, 2007

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    very good

    This is an amazing poem, and I can somewhat relate to it even. I'm very impressed on how good it is and that there is so much emotion and longing in this piece. verygood job.
    xo
    kandy