the dark dark night falls on him
barren streets of horror screams
I wish to devour your being
he peers into every chilly corner
cries, moans and howling came
sounds of bones breaking and crunching
he turned with a bellow into
a raging creature pounced on him
its eyes were piercing yellow
dagger-ed fangs tore his flesh
ripping and shredding his limbs
then a loud bang
and creature laid dead on him
their blood mingled until day break
when the sunset drew the crowd
tears for loved ones
filled the once barren streets
rescued he was hospitalized
only to lurk at the next full moon
raging the streets for prey
only to be taken down
by a silver bullet
A contest entry
- Deeper into the Darkness by Dark Soul Reaper.
300 points, ended June 20, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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phew the hairs are bristling on the back of my neck. i will sleep with the light on tonight Kat very wherewolfesque i think well done . peter


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Good write. It flowed pretty well and i enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.


