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Colors Win; You Lose.

Blood sheds red,
It all looks the same,
[Unless you're color-blind.]
        And Heaven knows the wound
        Hurts equal. 

Dresses and ties Look oh-so similar
On everyone;
[Besides the fact;
          Maybe they're different sizes.]

He said,  She said,
[They said.] 
We all gossip.

And when our lips touch,
[We all feel the shock;]
And let the vouls,
[Ooh, Ahh,
        And the exception of wow]
Escape our lips,
As the fireworks explode,
And let love rein down on our hearts.

Paint me a picture,
Of colors.
Blended together;
So pretty I'll be thinking that
I just found a rainbow as the prize,
[In my cereal box.]

Write me piece,
of Art In Words.
So my mouth waters
As I speak letters,
That were lost long ago,
[With love and faith.]
So far gone,
That even Columbus couldn't find them.

Kindergarten wasn't important,
[Was it?]
Because sharing and compassion
Has all flown out the window,
[Just as time has.] 

So douse yourself in hypocrisy.
Plead religion,
[We've all got our religion,
          But don't doubt my fists;
          Named:
          I'm Right & You're Wrong.]
And I'll plead that your lips
Are cursed with brain washed lies.
              Lies all hold a hint of truth,
              And while some think Ignorance is bliss,
              I think it's the portion that is ignorance push the "hint of truth"
              Out.
                            You are wrong.]

[Grow Up?]
Maybe you should Grow Down.
Back to when
[Colors]
Were accepted and every color in the crayon box
Was equal;
And we wore more than black and white,
[Because they are what is slimming.]

Author notes

For a Contest on whether Gay marraige Is Right or Wrong.
If you're dull and didn't get my message,
It is PERFECTLY CORRECT.

I beleive that gays are not hurting you.
Who cares what they do.
If you don't beleive in gays I want you to "TURN GAY". You can't?
Well Shucks, I suppose that's how the gays can't "TURN STRAIGHT."
I, myself is straight, but I beleive if love is love... What does gender matter?

It's pathetic.

I am saying that children are open to more ideas than adults now a day.
Don't discriminate;
Especially because of religion as your irritating response.
[Doesn't the bible say not to judge?]
It is saying we all bleed blood read, We all wear clothes and we all speak the same lines.
And the last portion is that children are open to new ideas and different things are a pleasure.
So stop being so boring and close minded,
[black is considered to make people look thin and everyone now a days, especially in the word force, wears black- So be unique.]
We are all equal, Get over your weird thoughts.

Sorry that this is wayy over 25 lines.
I definitely broke the rule.
But I decided I wanted to write one anyways.

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  • -Death-s Punchline-
    July 17, 2007
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    Deep

    Wow, this is beautiful. It's so flowing and just... wow. I'm just speechless. I loved these lines.

    "So douse yourself in hypocrisy.
    Plead religion,
    [We've all got our religion,
    But don't doubt my fists;
    Named:
    I'm Right & You're Wrong.]"

    THis is a beautiful thing, wish yu well in the contest.

    jan


  • live2die
    July 2, 2007

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    this is good
    but when i read this i found it more about how the world looks at ther colour of our skin
    anothing aobut gay or gay marrage i dunno
    i just


    • They Say Shannon
      July 2, 2007
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      Gays vs. Straight
      and Blacks vs. White are very similar subjects,

      but this was discussing on moreso how straights and gays are similar so they shouldn't be discriminated.
      Such as everyone bleeds; what makes gays different?
      We all wear the same clothes. Things like that,

      so it's saying we shouldn't discriminate against them and they should be alowd to love.


  • bloved
    June 28, 2007

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    this is really good....there's really nothing to say because everything you wrote said it all....

    THanks for the entry


  • This heart of black
    June 26, 2007
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    very good write friend, this is exactly what i was loking for. pen on


  • A n g e l E y e s
    June 20, 2007
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    good write you have here.
    i love it
    good luck in me contest!

  • She Stole My Voice
    June 19, 2007
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    Amen.


    =D


    ♥

    ~Princess of Shadows~

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