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I Would Give My Life*


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Nothing could stop me,
I would set you free
I would give myself right now
To cleanse the illness, the only way I know how

I would take that final breath
And shiver myself to death
If it would make you last longer here
I would die for you,I’d wipe away your tears

I love you, my most precious gift
My life to you I’d give
Your eyes so gentle, loving to look at
I smile and can’t imagine, them never looking back

The lips that always set me on fire
The passion that your heart aquires
The way you hold your head, when you are wrong
A mischievious look, that says I belong

I look to the Heaven and I plea,
This is my Angel Lord, Please take me.
I love him so, he belongs here with family and friends
I’m not much needed, so for him in your kingdom, I will stand

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  • zhaniswolf
    June 21, 2007

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    wow. this is a very sweet, romantic poem. you took the option and used it well. great job and good luck.


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    June 20, 2007

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    Awww this is really sweet. If is so noble to sacrifice yourself for another. However, I think your inteded would want to be with you.