people laugh because your not them
dont listen be your own gem
to take in the words and go on not to walk to crawl
you take it to heart and started drinking alcohol
but youve got a friend in me
you may or may not agree
but what they say is wrong
and i could write a song
about how they are and how i am
i think the title would be bam
im just the same but i dont call people things
im not a prep so i dont hang around in clings
so be yourself and have a good time at that
the one whose sayin it is probably a spoiled bratt
A contest entry
- A CONTEST for odd people - do it now. by Edna Sweetlove.
300 points, ended June 22, 2007, 9 entries
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What an interestingly written poem this is. I can accept the absence of capitals and other standard punctuation, but your adopted "cool" style of writing should surely observe grammatical and spelling rules? Also the last 4 lines need a translation.
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