First off i need to say that the music to this is not my own
i do not take any credit for that (it is to the song "This is Halloween" in "The nightmare before christmas") also some of the beats are slightly off from the movie version
To get the effect of this song that i am trying to do, imagine Marilyn Manson singing with his style with these words. enjoy!
Boys and Girls of every age
Would you like to know the right way
Come with me and you will see
In the town of Christian teens
This is Christian Teens! This is Christian Teens!
Angels praise in the dead of night
This is Christian Teens! Everyone will let you see Jesus Christ
Are the demons going to die of fright?
It's our town. Everybody Praise! In this town of Christian Teens.
I am the angel hiding in your mind
I am the one that keeps you in line
I am the angel hiding in your heart
I am the one that gives you a start
This is Christian Teens! This is Christian Teens!
Christian Teens! (4x)
In this town, we call home, Everyone hail to Jesus Christ!
In this town, dont we love it now, everyones waiting for the next coming
Around that corner man, hiding in the trash can, something's waiting to lead you astray (Just PRAISE!)
This is Christian Teens! No one said it was easy! (we can help and thats just fine)
Say it once! Say it twice! They will have to pay the price!
Ride with our God in the dead of night
Everybody praise! (2x) In our town of Christian Teens.
I am the angel hiding with all ease
I am the one that makes you want to please
I am the angel hiding in your mouth
I am the one that you can't live without
I am the best angel of them all
I am the one that causes Satan to withdrawl
This is Christian Teens! (2x) Christian Teens! (6x)
People dead, dying everywhere. They were the ones who never cared.
It's our job to tell people, If they dont listen oh well.
In this town, dont we love it now, everyones waiting for the next coming
Tell it to God he isnt a fraud and praise like an angel, make you jump to the sky
This is Christian Teens! Everyone applaud!
Won't you please make way for a very special guy
Our man Christ is king of the Universe
Everyone hail to Jesus Christ now.
This is Christian Teens! (2x) Christian Teens! (4x)
In this town, we call home, Everyone hail to Jesus Christ!
A contest entry
- "Faith Seeker's Group" PIF Three Day Quicky Contest by Tabitha-Robin.
605 points, ended September 7, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow this is super good i like the new and old song great job!!!!
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haha, I like it,
You rewrote a good song
and its still good.
Not many peopel can do that
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sorry
honestly i dont like it because you have changed the words to a very cool song...but other than that...i like the thought you put into it...well done -
Wow, what a way to come out of writers block, very well done I liked it.
~K~
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I thought it was a very good blend of the song and your own true impressions about Christ. I applaud thee.
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I am the angel hiding with all ease
I am the one that makes you want to please
I am the angel hiding in your mouth
I am the one that you can't live without
I am the best angel of them all
I am the one that causes Satan to withdrawl
This is a really good write. Thank you and God bless you. It is hard for teens to hold on to faith and to stick with the Lord. It is trying times for them. This is a wonderful light of FAith you have written. God bless you and thank you for your entry. Good luck in the contest.
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This was really cool!!! I liked it.
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nice... -JADA
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I believe you were talking about the town in a present and past tense about the town in our hearts and it once was full of sadness and pain. But when Jesus entered it made a beautiful place to reside full of hope and peace.
Good Job!
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this is interesting, i am not sure i understood it. It seemed in a sense both bashing and encouraging to Christian teens
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It'd be a good inspiration for Christian teens... not that I'd know, I'm an atheist!
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nice work sweet...
i9 like it bunches of bunches..xoxox
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I'm sorry but this just made Christianity into a morbid and scary topic. Which was cool... but still that had a strange effect on me... yes... very much so...
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Very creative. Nice twis to a song that was a little more morbid. You havedone a great job with this one. I hope it will be a good witnessing tool.
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