your shiny head makes me smile!
If i saw you on the sidewalk...
I'd want to talk for a while!
I wish that i could look..
a little more like you.
Then i'd be as cute as winnie the pooh!
I wish that i could take you by the hand...
and run around...
and jump in the sand!
But if i ever do meet you...
I'm not quite sure...
what i would do!
A contest entry
- A CONTEST for odd people - do it now. by Edna Sweetlove.
300 points, ended June 22, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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haha i love this sharron good luck in the contest i love you so much
p.s. that edna chick doesnt know what she's talking about this is so cute and the first word is right..i dont know what she's talking about
great job!
always and forever,
caty -
i like this.... sarcasm... is good!! great piece!! and good way to show commpassion.. not in a romantic way.. just friendly!
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Hard to read. Hard to like. Too many errors. Well, one anyway and it's the first word which is a bit of a neggo.
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What a lovely tribute to Edna's fat shiny head. I hear it brings you good luck when you rub it, and you will be showered with warm white blessings if you do.
Poor Edna has been sadly blocked and crucified for her soggy foggy porn addiction, so we all should kneel and make the sign of the crotch.
D.D.M.
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Good point. I'll decide whether to put you on my faves or not.
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