Could a lover ever feel more bliss
then with his lips entrapped
in a lovers kiss?
Could words ever express the love and joy
that a girl feels when caught
in a kiss from her boy?
Could a greeting ever be so wholly pure
then with a kiss?
I am not sure.
The lips' attack
the tongue's embrace
the lungs fall short
and both hearts race
both lips meld
as if into one
a twisted game
that both have won
A kiss screams of love
and of passion true
and primal urges
spring anew
a kiss is so subtle
and yet so strong
and every kiss
comes with a song
what higher power instilled in our minds
such strong love and emotions
that only a kiss now finds?
What is in our lips that makes us fly
and why do our lips' embrace
cause an euphoric high?
Is there a statement of love so wholly pure
then a simple kiss?
No, I am sure.
Author notes
Author: Unrequited Writer
Theme: Odes to the things that suround us, and the questions they ask.
the flow of the poem is intended to start slow and then speed up and then slow down to the end. Much like the flow of a kiss
A contest entry
- Truth Of Life contest round THREE (invite only) by xandercheerios.
1000 points, ended July 31, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh yah, spelling mistakes (since I can't criticize anything else darn you) it's A euphoric high (stupid english language) and THAN a simple kiss. I may have missed others, but I was just totally encaptured the whole way through.
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Holy... kiss! Um can you maybe give others a fighting chance??? Just... WOW! I fell out of love with my... k this is weird... EX-fiancee, because she moved back to BC where her family is. After she called off the wedding, she said she still wanted to date... then she moved, and so I realized I was falling out of love with her... she took it hard, but prolly not as hard as her cancelling the wedding after I had put so much effort AND money into it (more than she ever did). SO... needless to say I haven't been able to feel real love since... but slowly am able to build it back... this poem is perfect for me, I think I may just put it in my... book... with ur permission of course. THANKS so much for the entry... keep it up!
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Aw, lovely piece.
I think you captured the same flow as in a kiss. My favorite stanza is the second, you can tell that the flow changes and it has wonderful imagery and wording. Great piece.
Have a wonderful day,
FallenPoeticAngel
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mmmmm
This poem creates some beautifully sensual images but also shows that kisses can be lighthearted and fun as well...a girl being caught in a kiss from her boy...very well done. Congratulations
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