I trust, as one would a mothers touch
Her sweet offerings of repair
I am lost in another world
A dream land of rainbows and lolly-pops
My imagination gone wild
A captive I am, awaiting her lips
The hunger, the urge and desire
This fire burns deep in my loins
Taunts me and renders me weak
As I seek her luminous flesh
The taste of her breast
Wishing again for her love
Magic moments known only to us
Her gentle persuasion demands I find my way
By Bob Fox
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o my
Her gentle demands will persuade you to find your way...
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You might like to read my poem Passionate Kissses.
Please visit me at my web site, http://mareannspoetry.ning.com
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Beautifully written and expressed, such a nice way to write an erotic poem, showing passion and lust for a love one.
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I see the fire you had for the one you penned ..maybe was love that drove this fiz and needs you have drunk upon for someday you will be with the one you penned for and nourished the nectar in the drive so driven for..I know she loved it hun hugs always Angel♥
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your words were very sensitive and very very beautiful i liked this tha title made me hold my breath but this wasnt to bad -
WONDERFULLY SWEET
This is just wonderfully delich...your words speak of a love that is longed for and needed to satisfy a inner hunger...great write~first one I have read since joining and it was a beauty... -
very passionate write and wrote with such beauty and grace well done
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There are just too many incredible lines to quote back to you..They are all my favorite ..
this is one of my favorite writes so far from you..
but I'm sure you will impress me again
smiles ~Pastel
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Magic moments known only to us Her gentle persuasion demands I find my way...The hunger, the urge and desire This fire burns deep in my loins...found myself holding my breath at your pretty words
so wonderful well written, thank you so much for sharing your pretty words
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So Beautiful and passionate!
This is like the morning fresh air on a new summers day...passionate, loving, oh so beautiful! Love it..
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aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh I love the yearning
so sensual and romantic
this would woe any woman lucky enough to recieve these words
great write here my friend.
Michelle
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Sigh... I think I like it best when you write like this. You are so talented and very passionate indeed. Takes my breathe away. Sigh... Beautiful
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