Our eyes met for the very first time,
And the beauty started to unfold.
Those brown eyes, which glisten in starlight,
Make my heart skip a beat.
Beauty flourished even more,
When your lips pressed against mine.
When you hold me in your arms,
And cradle me where we lay,
I wish the moment would never end.
I wish it would just last forever.
The love is growing,
I can feel it.
I can feel you loving me.
Author notes
Oh my gosh. I think I met the man of my dreams... Yeeeeee! So happy!
A contest entry
- MOST IMPROVED POET! ANYTHING~ EVERYTHING by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended July 5, 2007, 74 entries
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I'm happy. So please comment :)
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amazing
it made me think of the guy i really like, the guy i cant have, the guy that doesnt want me anymore... and it made me cry. its so beautiful.
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AAAAaaaaah, this is a very sweet piece for your early work! I did enjoy the read of it~ I can't wait to see your next piece.
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