Jumping from cloud to cloud
Leaving my worries behind
Flying higher than a lonely balloon
Because today I'm above it all
Won't let anything bring me down
I'm done tripping over my insecurities
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Title inspired by my favorite song off the album [[Louder Now]] by [[Taking Back Sunday]]
OMG I'm excited, this one is happy (i guess) but what do you guys think? Seriously?!!?!!??
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Awesome
I like this. It's really good. Keep up the good work. -
i wish i was that high!
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very nice! it reminded me of that part in Anchor Man where he and that chick are riding the unicorns or whatever over the rainbow........lol
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yay
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dammit i hate u i wanna leave my worries behind! *rolls eyes* bitch... lol... good write
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The title reminded me of the Steve Martin movie. Thanks for the reminder to let it go and drop the stress!
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very good!!!
umm let me say life is a balance (that is my motto) so if you have like a ton of angst poems.. then this is the balance of those poems.. and you did extremely well with this one.. i think you ended it superbly..way to go extremely good write..
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LOL
It's happy from what I can tell.
It's written very well and I am glad I got to read this. Great job and keep writing great, because to be honest, you are pretty talented.
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Short but what a great message. I wish that we could all feel this happy everyday. Great flow and imagery. Keep up the wonderful writing
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Yes it would be nice if we could feel like this everyday. But if not possible for everyday then I'm glad I feel it once in a while. Thank you for reading!
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sweet and short
it is kind of hard to write happy stuff huh?
the only thing i did not like was that it was a bit too short
it is nice but i really like the dark stuff better.
adults think i should write less dark poetry
but who wants to read a poem about a flower eh?
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it's short because it is not at all possible for me to write a happy poem any longer than this!
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sounds great !
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