i dont have any desire
to write my feelings down on paper, love.
it would take more than these words
to tell you how much i love you,
but im finding myself
confessing my heart on this paper
Every moment i see the sun
breaking[only]in your eyes;
over our flowing river;
changing and taking
with each new current&feeling
its waters are peaceful and deep;
forever beautiful[so lovely]
&& thats how i see you.
Each passing moment;
every perfect[love-filled]glance.
who am i to be without you?
would i become a mere nothing?
[you have my everything
you're my everyone]
Each moment my heart
reaches out for you even more;
i've been by your side-
your soul-this secret i could never keep.
When love found you
i watched those[fascinating]eyes darken
[the most beautiful day of my life]
Each moment, ours
my heart[always]yours
so when it comes down to it
where will we be?[in love?]
when the lights change
and the moon comes for us again
[with the brilliant;soaking rain]
will it be simple?
or will everyone continue to misunderstand
in there inconsiderate habit of changing?
-x-x-
{[he takes my breath away]}
she says; out loud; for all to hear
they pause; watching her
realizing her love in a[not.so]shaded place
she stands strong[in love]
x-his always-x
no one could ever change that.
m. m. o'malley
6-18-07
11 36 p.m.
Author notes
love, lust, feelings
he's wonderful.
©♥
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel... by KittieLyyn.
360 points, ended June 24, 2007, 39 entries
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very great. thanks for entering.
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well thank you.
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Still say YAY!
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I love it. I can totally understand this one, and can totally relate. Good write. Now, if I could stop hitting the home button, my life would be the best in the world.
Now I have writers block. Maybe its just when we dont write about what is truley on our minds that we cannot write, and the dealy sin in this is we don't always know what is on our minds, which swirl in confusion and all that great stuff. -
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oh yeah, writers block is always great stuff
im glad you liked this hon.
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