In the blink of an eye I found her
Tall, true, beautifull, and strong
Her long beautiful dark hair flowing behind her
Like an endless waterfall flowing from heaven
In the blink of an eye I found her
Like the light from a lighthouse
Standing tall and strong
Guiding me from a violent
In the blink of an eye I found her
And in her i found peace and pleasure
I found someone I could confide in
Someone I could trust, a friend
In the blink of an eye I found her
A friend beyond friends
My secound true girlfriend
And together we stand
In the blink of an eye I found her
And with her I hope to spend
The rest of my life with
For she makes me so happy
In the blink of the eye I found her
And from this moment I pleadge
To love and to hold
To care for through sickness and in health
Her name................Mistress Kitty
Any and all thoughts.
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I wish i knew a guy that could write something like this for me. I am incredably jeleaous of your girlfriend. GGRRRRRR Why is it that the most awsome most talented guys are already spoken for or gay?
All through reading this i was waiting for you to say "in the blink of an eye i lost her" sorry but that is where i saw this poem going but when it didn't i was pleasently suprised, well done and good write
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you forgot the word storm from the last line in the second stanza. amazing poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I love this is really good my pet keep it up
s from your sexy beytch owner searra 
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Very well
i love this one alot.. wow, i like how you started each one off with the same thing, very strong.
xxpplealwaysleave.xx
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this is one amazing poem prince. keep writing like this an du will go far my friend
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awwwwww how sweet!!!
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I loved it, it is such a beautiful poem and exactly how I want to feel!!!!!!!
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I like how you describe her and show how much you love her without ever just saying things like, well she's hott, or something like that. You say beautiful and that means so much more than hott. It is a really good poem. I like it. whoever this is about they are lucky
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awwww
sounds like me and ash....lol i love it keep it up dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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THIS IS SO SWEET I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I Love it
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I love this
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This is absolutely beautiful!!! Very sweet!!! Also very well written and shows you have allot of talent!!! Great Job!!! Keep writing!!! I look forward to reading more from you!!! Truly an amazing job!!!!
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I absoutely loved it
This is amazing Sir Dark truly a wonderful piece to the one you love she is very lucky keep up the great write dear sirs Fallen 
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AWW. Why must all the amazing boys be taken or gay? It ruins so much of my fun. Your girlfriend is very lucky, I hope she never let's a great boy like you go. <33
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I like this. It is sweet.
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nice job, poet. In line eight though it seems like there should be something after 'violent'. . . but I love how you repeat the first line in every stanza, it's lovely. And so sweet. . .
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So I see someone thinks this dedication is to them eh? *looks at Melissa* how sweet.
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so?
i told them it was not for them so why do you care so much? -
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I get why she cares...
Because when we were dating you said this was for me.
Now that your dating someone new, you make it theirs, very nice
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i like it
very well written i enjoyed it
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Hmm?
What a wonderful poem. Prince. you did great. I love how you always put In the blink in of the eye I found her. Thats is Awesome. Nicely done.
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its wonderful.
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**Jo
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This makes me feel about how much a care about for Matthew. Its deep, sincere, and powerful. Fantastic jo
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This makes me feel about how much a care about for Matthew. Its deep, sincere, and powerful. Fantastic jo
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Wow
how sweet
i just love how you take the poem you wrote for me and make it someone elses. haha wow -
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not true
it was wrote for kitty, whos now a senior. her real name is kirsty, a.k.a kitty
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Aww...
I wish someone would write something like that about me. It really makes me wanna cry, i guess i don't deserve love poems. You wrote it so very beautifully. Your girl is very lucky to have if your words say anything about you. Amazing job thank you so much for sharing.
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I Miss You
OMG This is making me cry now.
I miss what we ad.
I was so STUPID to break up with you.
But now I know you dnt love me anymore so maybe we shuld stay friends!! -
Babe I cant stop reading this
Baby I Love You Sooooooooooooooo Much!!!!!
I cant Stop Reading this!!
Your my life and I love you no matter what!!
I NEVER EVER EVER wanna lose you baby
U mean the world to me!! -
to mushy,but good
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AWWW!
This is sooo beautiful and congrats on yur girl. She must really be a great girlfriend.
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Wow-o
Nice...your a great boyfriend! Lol...
5 stars~
-tatsu
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A lovely romantic poem. 'Pleadge' I think should be 'pledge'. 'I' needs capitalising in line 10. I liked the use of simile here.
Pozo
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wow vampy will really like this ur pretty good no really super good
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aww this is beautiful. i love this. you're a great writer. keep writing.
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Baby this poem makes me cry
I LOVE YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!
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girl you r seriously lucky!
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thanks
thanks for saying im lucky! and actually yea i think i am!!
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i stare in silence. my face experetionless.
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