Only in my dreams
am I happy and free
Living in the place
I really want to be
Able to feel things
never felt before
Complete understanding
always wanting more
Time isn't relevant
no schedules to keep
Only precious moments
so no tears to weep
My heart filled with love
like I have never known
Timeless is the feeling
as if carved into stone
As I dream in the dark
I know that I do smile
So until I must awaken
I'll stay right here a while
Only in my dreams
do I feel such utter peace
The world just slips away
as I feel my spirit release
Author notes
Option 2
'Here in the dark
Where I dream myself to sleep
I feel my heart as timeless
As the carving on the stone...'
"Sky is Falling" - by : Beth Hart
A contest entry
- For The Creative At Heart...... by poet2angels.
725 points, ended June 24, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A very nice write to accompany the quote chosen. Endearing write. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
["Timeless is the feeling
as if craved into stone" - I think you meant carved here.]
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Thanks, oops, I will fix that!
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lovely entry and wonderful rhyme and flow..
Y for entering!
Lynda
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It's amazing how our dreams can take
us anywhere and everywhere that we want.
In them anything is possible and our lives
are so much more simplified and happier.
I love how you took this quote and made
it your own. The imagery and background
is great here! Good luck to you my friend
and keep it up! Thanks for sharing this.
Jeremy0826
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excellent
Aww, Jeannie this is beautiful, the backgrounds as to the depth of the message in you words, to escape in our dreams what peacefulness, the world I we long for it to be when our eyes our open.. Fantastic
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