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the road less chosen

The Road less chosen


do I still a child chose the path?
The path of peer pressure and norm.
Or do I set a new path
one less traveled
make a name for myself?

Or do I still a child
chose the path
path of dark
drugs, sex, alcohol ?
like all my peers?

no im going to be the next Michael Gaines?
set my mind to one thing
one thing only?

which path to travel?
which road to taste?
I make my own path

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  • Andu
    July 11, 2007
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    Ah, the question that lingers in the minds of all the youth. There is a reason why it is the road less chosen...it is definatley the harder choice. This is a good poem, I like the way you dealt with this issue, you pose some hard questions to the reader.
    Anyway, great write, great interpretation of the title. Thanks for your entry in my contest. Good luck!