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Rambled oddness

Screw up again and you're gone they say
But now I'm here alone, maybe I would benefit that way
swear solemnly honestly that this is the final straw
but my soul was defying and this I forsaw
stepped over and reached around the ignorant views
while other empty souls would cry out abuse
but why do we have to follow the blind man
when his motives can only bring us into despair and mental quicksand
I finally rebel and go against the world
onto the nineteen hour flight, with my mind swirled
See, they say, I warned you too many times
and for it all to end, can we just stop with the mediocre rhyme?!

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  • PastelMoons gold member
    June 21, 2007

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    "but why do we have to follow the blind man
    when his motives can only bring us into despair and mental quicksand" Love this..Great job! ~Pastel