Such a beautiful site.
Unreal in fact.
Never could you believe
Sunsets could be so gorgeous.
Even to the point of staring at them,
Till the sun sets completely.
Still can't believe was a picture it is.
And as I sit there and watch the sun set,
Not just watching but thinking, the
Desire to write flows through my hands.
Poetry is the link to beauty.
Open your eyes and see.
Every wonderful detail in site.
Take out a piece of paper and pen,
Right now just look at that site.
You don't even need to think... just write!
Author notes
Acrostic (Spells Sunsets And Poetry)
Picture Inspired.
A contest entry
- Write About The Picture by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
525 points, ended June 26, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thanks for the entry, but it's not quite what we were looking for. If you would like further explanation, please send me a private message and a link to the poem and I will be glad to discuss it with you.
Elizabeth -
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Very berry uniquely penned poem here and I really loved how well this poem flowed and went. Tis a very unique acrostic and I enjoyed the depth and flow through out the poem. very well penned and excellent work. good luck
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Yay! I am glad you liked it It's the first thing I thought of... when I look at a sunset.. it makes me want to write lol Thanks for the comment and great contest!
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33
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