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So tired

I may be getting sick
I may be sick of you
I've been waiting her so long
for some kind of warning sign
that you could love me back
my affection is no crime

Industrialists work long
and hard into the night
as alabastor plains fall right out of sight
make me feel myself
make me feel it now

I may be catching cold
I may be cold to you
Your actions speak so loud
my ears and heart are in pain
your dreams they speak volumes
but only if you make them heard

Say the word once
Say the word
As everlasting loves
fallout like atom bombs
shell after shell
hit the naked ground

Make this unjustice known

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  • capricornpoet
    June 19, 2007

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    powerful

    Lovely prose of wanting love to be exclaimed, imagery and sensitivity with geniality...deep and modern ..


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    June 19, 2007
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    wonderful write. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck