I'm a poison ivy
I'm a bitter tree
Baby, do you love me
And desire me?
Passsionate sensation
Burning soul in red
Crazy combination
That you won't forget.
Falling on the ground
Look up at the sky
Can you hear my sound:
"Fly my love, and die."
A contest entry
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hm...
Maybe I'm just different, but I see stuff in here that seriously goes darker than most people could imagine...
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um interesting....unique
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Hey! great piece, nice and short and to the poing, the way I like it. I really like the two opening lines and the title. One thing, passionate only has two s's. Great job, thanks for entering and good luck!
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very intriguing... certainly
original... love the content and the rhyme... interesting combination of words and images!
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Interesting poem! Thanks and good luck
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