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"My Vampire"

A cheap embrace welcomes sudden disgrace.
There's shadows on the walls but not reflections in the mirrors.
Appear as something that you pretend to be. Fake as the agony you put onto yourself.

The morning after, hiding behind the bodies of victims.
A cheap reak of blood. Comprehend the pain, that saids you only succeeded for the minute. The minute is over...

Recover lost emotions you falsely felt. Heartache I'll feel all alone.
Vampires are creatures I wrongly accused of being bad... but you're not a bloodsucker... only a soulsucker... suck the life from me bad.

The morning after, hiding behind the bodies of victims.
A cheap reak of blood. Comprehend the pain, that saids you only succeeded for the minute. The minute is over...

Getting high, making me low... I know for a fact it'll all disppear like your reflection. Living desolate, boy? It'll all fade away like the sun... when you awake. Give or take, it's all invain. No point with staying sane... when I have to live within these walls of your reckless brain, staring out of a blackened window pane.

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  • Romeo Dragonheart
    June 29, 2007

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    Beautiful expression and use of colors to flow along with your words, good luck in the contest btw. I enjoyed the flow and sound of your words.
    Later
    Romeo


  • sevnsyn silver member
    June 22, 2007
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    Fantastic

    This is a different mix of things...i really like this!


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    June 19, 2007
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    awesome poem good luck in my contest