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Restless Clock of Eternal Vengeance

Catastrophe whirls through her soul
Carving suicide into her fragile mind
Fear overwhelms, takes control
She throws her skull through a mirror

He teased her with dreams of mercy
Pleasured himself when she screamed out suffering
Thrashing like a puppet oblivious
Woes of seduction in rhythmic madness

For many years she remained in the dark
Imprisoned by the shadows of hopelessness
Consumed by dreams of sadistic justice
Boiling inside her with ravenous fervor

“Promises of pain. . .I owe you nothing more.”

Soaking skin in harsh chemicals
Melting in unimaginable anguish
As he reaches for his mangled face
How alive he must feel tonight

"Remember now the corruption you've created
The fear in my heart where your eyes were fixated
This soul you had forever vexed
The destructive appetite you forbiddenly sated."

Her song the only gift she may return
It rifles through him with unrelenting might
Squeezing the oxygen from the inside out
Eradicates each comfort he ever lived for

Fear will hide him in her darkness
A secret locked away for all time
Restless clock of eternal vengeance
Tolling the bells of his gory demise

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  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    June 22, 2007

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    WHOA

    THIS IS FUCKIN BADASS! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! KEEP AT IT. See, you have soooo much fuckin talent. I'M A HUGE FAN but of course you already knew that, right? lol. I love the descriptions


    • tony1kanobee
      June 22, 2007
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      thanks, that's great to hear!! TRULY I'm grateful for your comment on my work. Youve inspired me with your own work, you know - it's brilliant!
      i will keep at it...i go days without writing then i will write half a page to several pages of stuff, then i'll start taking pieces of that i like and working with them on the pc, and begin piecing them together. by the time i'm done i have soemthing finished, though it's slow process.