A pleasant accidental collision,
Ending in polite conversation,
Intrigued by inviting personas,
Becoming mere acquaintances,
Traveling through a world unknown,
Created for the existence of you and I,
Attracted by words spewed...poetically,
Romantically dancing with souls of lust,
Yearns mourned longing for fulfillment,
Craving to please lusting hungers of the flesh,
Amorous quarrels frequently accommodated,
Intertwined desires imaginatively replenished,
Infactuated with the idea your being,
Enabled to your touch by lands greatly spread,
Leaving the world of reality,
Living in the fantasy of our passion,
Blind to the view of your frame, strangers in the world...known,
Basking is the lust of eachothers hearts, familiar to the feeling of you
Author notes
About falling for someone you've never met. (Internet Telephone dating svc. etc.) Hope you like it. Regarding the contest, This is my lastest poem, "the Envasion of My Silence" is entered in this same contest is mine also. That is my 1st poem I entered here.
A contest entry
- MOST IMPROVED POET! ANYTHING~ EVERYTHING by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended July 5, 2007, 74 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love the loving pieces you do and the words you use..man it's like...unexplainable
"Infactuated with the idea your being,
Enabled to your touch by lands greatly spread,
Leaving the world of reality,
Living in the fantasy of our passion,"
This stanza is nicely put and arranged...i loved it
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You're spoling me in your words today. Don't start something you can't finish! 
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You have made remarkable improvement from your first to now~ I hope you continue growing ~ I can see you will make a master out of poetry Nice job! Thanks for entering the contest ~ best of luck to you!
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This was really great! The words seem familar .
I loved the way you expressed your deep feelings of the unknown but thrilling ride of emotion.
Wonderful!
~Lisa~
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nice job
ok i like this i can feel the emotion in this work really nice job very well thoughtout nice choice of words as well good job keep writin
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this so nice and smooth love it, it have so much passion in it good job
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Thanks for your comment! Appreciate you stopping by. Don't be a stranger!
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Such expresses of romance
Wow wonderfully written I love the words you used, to describe the love and lust that you are longing for. It might be just a write sister. But I met my husband on the internet 5 years ago. ANd Love does happen. Lover (LISA)
"Yearns mourned longing for fulfillment,
Craving to please lusting hungers of the flesh,
Amorous quarrels frequently accommodated,
Intertwined desires imaginatively replenished,"
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Okay Sis...
I see you are letting your true light shine thru
this is great! So full of unseen emotions that have a burst of Romance. I thik you've done very well.
Piff
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cools
awsome poem keep up de good work
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Wow...
relaitable sorta exept I actually saw him and meet him and I am a big no no about meeting on line but he is charming you know your sister is bad and when I am curious I'm just a loose cannon. but this was a deep peace i must say fantasy passion and some twist of reality. hugs I am going threw this with my A.P. Husband exept I only talked to him great piece love
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SO LOVELY!
Yes, as we talk with a person who may be miles aways and feel a connection of our hearts and thoughts we find ourselves falling for this person without ever have seen them.
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Oh that was hot. I didn't kow what to expect but I loved the rhyming and the fitting of the big words too. Although there were some mispellings it's the idea that counts. And I loved it.
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I don't know that it needs anything else. It seemed odd that you've got some stanzas that rhyme but that the others do not.
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