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Locatioon location where can I find love
look no more higher
than what is above
this state that you see
it's name is tennesee

Oh try try
to find that amor
look no further
than right through that door

extinguish provide
give birth toss aside
agree with me
I cry beseechingly

Love
Me
Why not?

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  • capricornpoet
    June 19, 2007

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    dark and satirical

    Abstract and dark satire of figure of love ..Tennessee,
    love me why not ..a paradox ..
    intriguing..