I haunt you in your sleep
I make it hard for you to breathe
While you have dreams of me
The me you cannot see.
When you awake, i am not there
I am not anywhere
I do not want to be seen
I only linger within your dream.
But one day you will see me
Love me, want me, need me
Until then, i will stay
To haunt you everyday.
A contest entry
- biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
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awesome
really nice write
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this is really good
nice job!
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wow
i love it its magnific i belive the wat that it is writen make it stick out alot and its so wow beautyful i coul blush ,if i wasnt dead but your a good artist -
hmm... I like it. It makes me wonder who it is or even what it is. I do not think it is a person, perhaps some sort of force? something sort of devil like? I guess it could even possibly be something that possesses the soul or something, I am not so sure.. what did you have in mind when you were writing this poem?
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oh ven!!! omg! this was so kool. This was the perfect reflection of wuts going on in m ylife right now. This is exactly wut i've been feeeling. Omg stop reading my diary! I loved it as always. keep it up u have raw talent!
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thank u! i gues i SHOULD stop reading your diary, huh? lol
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VB
you seem to be getting deeper each time you write, am not quite sure what this is about, but it does seem to hint at one person affecting another but not in the present.
As usual, a lot to think about and not whooly apparenbt as to what the poem is about, well done,
Michael
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