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Scream

Scream,
Thats all you can do
Scream,
Becasue no one can hear you
Scream,
Your in so much pain
Scream,
You have nothing else to gain
Scream,
Your going to die
Scream,
God Damn you want to cry
Scream,
Death is near,
Scream,
You Must Face Your Fear.

SCREAM.

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everything I had is gone

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  • AshesFromFire
    June 23, 2007

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    I LOVE this! Bravo to you! This is great!!!!
    The flow of this worked really well. The ryhme was simple and didn't sound fourced. All in all you did a great job! Welcome to the finals!