GOD TODAY I ASKED MYSELF
WHY I FALL BACK IN YOUR WAYS
YOUR EVERYWORD I KNOW
YOUR WISH IMPLANTED IN ME
BUT STILL I LET GO
I FALL FLAT 4 NO REAL COST
I KNOW THE PAIN
THE TEARS AND SHAME
CANT IMAGINE THE FEELING
YOU FELT WHEN U DIED
I KNOW IT MUST HAVE HURT
TO SEE A MAN OF GREAT LOVE FALL
A UNIQUE BEING OF FLAWLESS MIGHT
NOT ONE SIN NOR STAIN
BUT STILL YOU EMBRASSED
SUCH DEATH SUCH SHAME
CANT UNDERSTAND WHY
YOU GAVE ME A PLACE IN YOUR HEART
A SHALLOW BEING I AM
NO RESTRAIN AND HOLD ON LIFE
I FALL AND STAND AND STAND AND CRUMBLE
I FAIL NOT SAIL IN SHAME NO HONOUR
I REACH OUT FOR UR HANDS
AND HALF WAY THROUGH I PICTCH FOR SIN
WHY DID YOU LOVE ME THEN
CUS I KNOW I DONT DESRERVE IT ALL
I DRINK AND SMOKE AND LIE
BUT STILL U HOLD ME WHEN I CALL
I STEAL AND CURSE BUT STILL U LOVE
DONT DESERVE THIS LOVE
YOU GIVE UNCONDITIONALY
YOUVE GIVEN THE WORLD TO ME
TO RULE AND TAKE CARE OF
I GAVE IT BACK TO YOU
WITH STAINS AND FILTH AND SHAME
AND STILL YOU LOVE
THIS HEART OF NO PURPOSE
SO THEN I TRY TO LOVE YOU
AND GIVE ALL I AM TO PRAISE YOU
TO SING A SONG OF GREAT MIGHT
TO SHOW HOW DEEP MY LOVE RUNS FOR YOU
BUT WITH EACH TUNE AND TONE I FALL
INTO SIN AND INTO LUST
HELP ME IS WAT I SAY
CUS DIS HEART IS LOST IN SHAME
A contest entry
- Grab these Points! by BabyBun.
2350 points, ended June 21, 2007, 19 entries
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Thanks for the entry - you have an interesting style. Best of luck!
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WOW this is a great write!!! kudos. sry i have no more points left...but if i had some i would give you all of them!
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very good
Great piece from a reflective mind. I love this, it is true to the core. Keep it up. Good luck in the contest. Thank u for reading and commenting my work. God bless u
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BRILLIANT PIECE OF WRITING
STUNNING WRITING. I FEEL YOUR PAIN IN THIS. WONDERFUL PIECE OF WRITING. THERE IS A HUGE AMOUNT OF 'GUILT,' IN THIS PIECE. THE POWER OF YOUR FEELINGS IS VERY VERY STRONG. WELL DONE FOR THIS GREAT PIECE OF WRITING.
ALL THE BEST
WAYNE
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