Bedtime, my favorite part
of the day
Bedtime take all of my troubles
away
Secret dreams of succulent delight
Dreams floating, in the air of the night
Peace of mind, peace of heart,
peaceful dreams right from the start
Secrete smiles of secrete joys
Dreams, a life that cannot last
put together from memories of the past
In a list
A contest entry
- Poems for my wall by Lauren Noir.
650 points, ended August 31, 2007, 83 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked the sweetness in this
I really like the idea of secret dreams, anything can happen then!
And you can dream what you want there and not care about people seeing becasue uit's time for your time, before you go to sleep
This would be a nice entry for my wall, as something to lift me up
Though the background was almost impossible to see the words!
I loved this, good luck
Thanks for entering
And well done -
bed time is my favirote time of the day too! I like sleeping, but I hardly sleep. I like this poem.. it's pretty good
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hhey sis how are you i wrote a poem similar maybe similar like this poem hope u like it dear i put the link here ttp://allpoetry.com/poem/3096650
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oh sis this is so sweet i love bedtimes alots so i love your poem
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