Distance is but a memory
Dust to dawn will show finally
It's one's vulnerability
It has to surrender it's self
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Option #6
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A contest entry
- I was born weak but I will never die weak… by second-born.
500 points, ended July 2, 2007, 8 entries
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Wow…very powerful write…thank you for taking up the challenge for this particular option…I think it’s in the last stanza should be with the apostrophe…but otherwise this is such a strong and truthful piece…
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Thank you so much. I certainly appreciate. lol
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a good penning here...as we alll must surrender self...good metaphors...great piece
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Thanks, Iggy, have a great day. lol
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