Believe in me, as they would say, as you wish your life away
Everyday in school they'd say they'd call. You'd wait up for them thinking, what are they doing.
Stalling? This is my bestfriend to me, but she's driving me to the edge of insanity!
Tender tear drops fall from the sky. I pray to the Lord, how can I survive?
Friends are people that should last forever. They are the one's your supposed to treasure.
Respacting your hopes and dreams. They'll help you get there, by whatever it means.
I have had friends that didn't treat me so well. Apparently by this poem, obviously you can tell.
Enemies stay and it's like they grow. But the more enemies I have, the truest friends they show.
Not only they stand by me, that's there true love shows. They are there in darkness and sun-light.
Devote friendship, without any betrayale. You can always find true friends, that you can never fail.
Author notes
I used OPTION #3. I made an acrostic about "BESTFRIEND". If you wanted me to put a space in between the two words, just let me know in my comment. I didn't know what you wanted. Maybe this wasn't what you were looking for, but overall, I hope it wasn't a total loss reading. I REALLY hope that wasn't.
A contest entry
- I was born weak but I will never die weak… by second-born.
500 points, ended July 2, 2007, 8 entries
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Is it true?
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Ohhhh mannn i envy you sooo bad
you wrote an amazing acrostic
srsly.
i've never been able to do that
I have had friends that didn't treat me so well. Apparently by this poem, obviously you can tell.
^i love that line.
and i hope you're not really having friend problems, they are no fun at all.
Im here for you
Love you!!!
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♥
Brandi -
Its great to have best friends, but there is always one out there that is your true best friend. You'll know when you find them, I've been betrayed by friends a lot, my search still goes on for that one true friend. You did an excellent job in this poem!
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Hun this is a sad poem. I know it's really really hard to find best friends, but believe me, you WILL find them one day. You're a great person...so just have hope and faith. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Keep writing and God Bless
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I believe in what you said that the more enemies you have, the more you’ll know your true friends are…I know some people whom you treated as friends let you down in the past…but don’t forget to trust other people who wanted to befriend you…hope you’ll find trustworthy friends in the future…
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Hey
I totally understand how u feel with this poem i dont have very many close friends my self that really care bout me for the most part. I agree with u in everyway with this poem I have been going through the same thing with one of my close friends. I mainly stay to my self now. one of my best of friends left and moved away and I miss her dearly. So i know where u are coming from yes its hard, but hang in there it will be okay. this poem was outstanding I mean outstanding u did a fantastic job with this poem way to go keep da ink flowin ttyl
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awwww! its sooo sad! im sorry u dont have the best of friends because i used to be in that position 2 but now i have finally found the ones that care... i guess u just hafta keep looking and hoping that everything will be ok... great poem!
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