Music lifts the clouds gathered all around
And lifts one up from being on the ground
Soothes the soul with it's lyrical sound
It's like doctor's orders when it's found
Life's rough edges and it's exterior decor
Are what the music was really made for
To refresh and ease one in their very core
Escape with music to joy and to the open door
In a list
A contest entry
- 48 Hour Contest!!!!!!!!!!! by Celticmoon.
300 points, ended June 25, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice flow and a wonderful rhyme scheme. Normally I am not a fan of rhyme unless done well and you have done it well. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
celticmoon
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This is a wonderful review, And I thank you for it.
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wonderfull as music is my greatest love...and my first love...carefully crafted beauty and elegance in this peerless piece of poetry Patricia...so lovely you are
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Thank you for the beautiful alliterations in this review, Iggy. I most appreciate it. lol
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wow...this is such a marvelous write indeed...I love music and I love your poetry...what more could I ask for? God bless you always in your writing...
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your review of this piece.
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