countdown has begun
doomed syllables
are dropping
down to
one
A contest entry
- Another Five Lines or Less by Heavenly Angel.
750 points, ended June 20, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awesome! I love this`piece
I love everything about it, I love how it ends with the word "one" I love the form like a funnel, I love the simplicity and the well chosen words and everything else about this piece that is so obviously likable!
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absolutely wonderful...
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ohh this is brilliant well done to you xxx
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lol, clever and cute seems to be the order of the day!
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Uniquely and wonderfully crafted
I like it! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest -
Aww yes I agree with her there
it is clever and cute!
All the best in the contest
Gaylene
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Clever and cute.
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