There's a whisper of new life unfolding;
a tender young shoot pushing through.
A life we await with excitement.
What will it be, pink or blue?
There's a whole lot of love for the giving,
and believe me, whatever you do,
we are waiting in anticipation
to lavish it, sweetheart, on you.
A contest entry
- Baby Boom by AnnD.
1000 points, ended July 6, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You have been HOOD WINKED by The Poetic Bandits. This is your day in the spotlight. Enjoy. What lovely lines you write here - how metaphoric in nature and what wonderful sentiments you have expressed so well in these lines. Easy to read and understand. Good flow, rhythm and rhyme as well here.
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this is so wonderful. here you have the image of a shoot with potential, ready to nourish the baby with lots of love and rhymes of energy
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This is so wonderful! Thank you very much for taking time to write for my new arrival! This piece reads with the flow of a nursery rhyme, bubbling and energetic. I simply adore it! Thanks again for sharing your lovely words with me!
~Lori ♥
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Gorgeous poem here I wish I was able to truly know that feeling maybe in heaven
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groovy i think is the word. a big grin at line 4.
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That is a really beautiful, tender poem. The rhyme is flawless and flows prettily from the tongue. You have said so much in those two short verses and I am sure she will love it
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