As I fall to the floor,
Once more,
I am torn.
No matter how bad it hurts,
No matter how hard you beat me,
I can't bring myself to leave,
And what's worse,
My, Dear;
Is that I'm lying here,
Still wishing you loved me.
I've stayed with you through all the pain & suffering,
And through all the bruises & all the beatings,
I've cried myself to sleep so many nights,
And I've tried to make believe so many times,
That you actually loved me.
I guess all stories can't be fairytales,
Some are nightmares,
Some are filled with fear,
Leaving you with nothing but tears,
And prince doesn't always save the princess,
Some times she's trapped in the tower,
Until her final hour.
So push me around,
Push me around,
I want to be your lover,
Break me down,
Break me down,
This could go on forever,
But you're always going to be my Wishful Lover,
My Fairytale,
My Nightmare.
There's a thin line between love & hate,
And, Darling, the barrier is about to break;
So push me around,
Break me down,
My Wishful Lover.
(My Fairytale, My Nightmare)
Author notes
4. Prayer's for extreme suffering.
I'm talking about abuse and neglect and serious pain.
5. Hope and Love. I will pay more attention to this if you write about it. It has to deal with the fourth one. So yes, they go hand in hand.
A contest entry
- Just Another Contest You Won't Look At Or Are You Proving Me Wrong?!? by Xxthe angry gothxX.
800 points, ended July 12, 2007, 39 entries
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Comments
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This was awesome. I thought it was real intriging how you used two opposite thing. A fairytale and a nightmare. I thought that was very unique. I liked it though. What I'm a little confused about is how this was in someway of a prayer. But this was cool. Good luck.
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This is very good. I specifically like the lines: "there's a thin line between love and hate, and Darling, the barrier is about to break." You'll find in life that this statement is more true than you think right now.
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The way you convey your feelings in this is wonderful. Your poem is filled with emotion! Great write! Good Luck
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