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I am mad, I am damn furious
I am amazed at this injustice
I look at what's right before my eyes
and I know in my heart, its just not right
I want to fight! I want to scream!
I want to destroy this enemy
But its in my head and in my heart
And the chaos in me, tears me apart

Damn...
Damn it all!
I just want to live.

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  • WantToMakeYouSmile
    June 19, 2007

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    wow

    This is awesome. It describes anger so well. I think you must have been furious when you wrote this for it to be so good. If you werent then that is absolutely amazing. Well done, keep writing. I'd like to read more of your stuff.