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Silence Please Come Home

Please! Please!
Shut up and be quite

Ripping my hair out
trying to find my own thoughts.

People fighting to be heard.
Heavy metal music piercing the brain.

Chaotic expression everywhere
Staggering fools, they think this is fun?!

Silence I need it now!

Un-escapable, and in my own house.
Everybody get the fuck out!!!!!

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Well This is exactly how I feel right now.

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  • DarkHeartedLove
    April 1
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    This was good i enjoyed the read.
    Good right.


  • Glasyalabolas
    October 31, 2007

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    Sometimes all the noise just gets a little too much and you can feel the "ARRRGGGHHHHHH!" building up.

    This piece is very reminiscent of that frustrated feeling.

    Good write.


  • ultimate beluga
    October 30, 2007

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    haha thats awesome. great mood, you really trapped me into the feeling! and of course, you used the magic word... very well indeed! thanks heaps for entering!


  • Swan song gold member
    June 27, 2007

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    Wow do we need a time out. Excellent in intensity
    the get the fuck out part was very well placed so you cursed appropriately. Very good


  • lunarmist 53
    June 19, 2007

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    Oh dear....oh my.....be calm...I sigh.

    Hoping you did more than just write this piece....
    Silence is a mental release, Open the door...walk outside...calm your body ..calm your mind....

    Then return,and quietly say ....
    Everybody get the fuck out...... allowing it to trail away.

    Alan.


  • Desire gold member
    June 19, 2007

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    Holy Moly!!

    Powerful piece and I imagine there are others who can relate with one of those days where peace cannot be found quite yet
    When my munchkins get going...boy do I want to mentally retreat

    Thank You for sharing this!
    Wish You Serenity
    Appreciate Your comments on my pieces

    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • Bob Fox
    June 19, 2007

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    wow

    sounds like moma has had a bad day.. Lol But I do remember things such as this.. save the heavy metal...

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