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Every time I speak with you
I realize there is so much more
than anyone can ever see.
I wonder, do I see different things in you
because we both are close?
Then I think perhaps it is because
I meet new people with an open heart.

I wish everyone could see you the way I do,
for all your strength, insight, intelligence and wisdom.

When you come to my mind I always think,
"because we are,"
which are beautiful words
that only touch on the surface of your beauty.


You are so wise and it pains me when I see the struggles life throws at you.
It pains me when others treat you badly
and I realize I share the same pain when other treat me badly too.


    You are beautiful- not only physically, but your heart and mind are beautiful and  because you're you and I love you the way you are.  no mistake or little thing can stop me from believing in you more than anyone else and respecting you the way you are.

    *caresses cheek  Nothing can amount to how my love is for you as my sister. * caresses your back. Not the specks of sand on the beach that is gleaming with your scent left in its midst,  *plays with hand  not the warmth of fire which brightens the dark sky with moon that glows bright, *lays my head on your shoulder *plays with hair* not the sweet smell of roses that blooms in the spring, not even the sparkle of the sun.  *hugs you* Nothing will be able to stop my loyalty for you because my love is constant and will always be true.  *runs fingers through your hair slowly.*  I will love you always and shall I say my affections for you is unexplainable and beyond your comprehension, because loyal love is that powerful.  *graps hand* My heart has been filled with everlasting love, *plays with hair* love that is pure- loving you as you, and that I love you and thats directly coming from the bottom of my heart. 

    So I fight, as I know you do as well my dear, singleness - I do not fear defeat.  *holds you For it cannot win  *plays with hair

    What gift can I give you as my family member for tomorrow? *holds you
    *grasps hands. You,with a heart as big as all creation? What can I possibly give you?  *plays with hair*  I would offer you the stars of admiration, respect, a fictional escape from stress, touch, my attention, and my heart. No diamond could shine as brightly as the smile you put upon my face.

    *plays with your hair and holds you close

    Hugs,

    Me

Author notes

option: why i want to be in your family. i'm an affectionate girl and i have a lot to give to you. i'm looking forward to what you want me to be in your family and look forward to getting to know you.

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  • SoftlyScreaming
    July 18, 2007

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    i think i know who you are... and this really touched my heart.. *tear* you really make me realize just how much people really do care. - i know i want you in my family


  • KenjiStar81
    June 23, 2007

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    This was so sweet and it spoke worlds to me.. Wonderfully written and just wow.. Those are some of the kindness things I have read in a long time, Good luck with the contest..


  • Vampyric Kitten
    June 22, 2007
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    OH wow what a gorgeous poem and of course you may be my AP sister..


  • Melodies
    June 19, 2007
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    What a happy way to show appreciation!

    A beautiful poem! Makes the reader glad to see such love.