Your mind bogged down
everything out of focus
nothing makes sense
anymore.
The dreary day
goes on and on
with no sign
of giving in.
When a mystical sound
fills the senses
washing away
the clutter.
Your head now clear
your mind, free to think.
No more fog
weighing you down.
And to think
this wonderful feeling has come
from a moment
of nature's melody.
A contest entry
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430 points, ended June 25, 2007, 44 entries
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Comments
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Nature's melody is such a gift. It can bring about so many wonderful thoughts and feeling that one can become lost within each time. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
celticmoon
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Great write
I love it
Thanks for entering!


